Maybe it's good, maybe not, you be the judge. Please hold back on any grammar nazism, as english is not my first language.
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„I179.�, thought the Captain. „Goddamn I179.�
The nav computer has been showing the same sector for five days now. Stuck right between Sirius and Sol, they were slowly running out of fuel and, even worse, good ideas.
The whole journey wasn't a good idea to start with. Taking a rookie crew, promising them quick cash, not having a deep-space worthy ship – it all added up now. Being a drug addict with debts didn’t help the situation either, and the good stuff ran out a couple of days ago.
He was on edge, hell, he was starting to panic. Looking around the bridge of the “Perseus�, he saw three other faces, faces of kids in their early twenties, gradually suspecting what they’ve gotten themselves into. Trying to cover it all up by telling them how well the trip was going wouldn’t do it anymore. They may have been novices, but they weren’t that stupid.
He was hanging around the nav computer, pushing random buttons, trying to look busy and professional. It was all good when he still had his stash stocked. Yet now he was just an unshaved, sweaty bum in his mid-forties who’s clearly been experiencing withdrawal, and he was everything else than trustworthy.
The fuel level got two serious hits during their journey. The first was when the Navigator messed up the coordinates and sent them way off their course. The second one was when they got jumped by two hostile ships looking for easy prey and had to rely on the afterburner to get out alive.
He took a glance at the fuel gauge. 327 units. Definitely not enough to get them to Sol. Definitely not enough to get them back to Sirius either.
He was dead whichever way. Even if he got back, McInnes would shoot him like a dog for not paying back his debts. Slowly suffocating and freezing on his ship once the life support went down was door number two, and seemed not much of an improvement. Well, there was always the third option – the gun he hid in his quarters. Compared to the other two, this was the pleasant way out.
The Captain took another look at the nav computer. I179.
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Do you want me to continue?
[Edited on 1-14-2014 by Marvin]









