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From post: 132752, Topic: tid=8308, author=Cindy wrote:Try working outside trying to shovel off a concrete area that is 24 feet by 48 feet for 3 hours with the wind blowing and it raining...Add snow to that sometimes and... .;)
:o Well, I just re-read your reply, Cindy, and can't figure what else, besides snow, you'd need to shovel off the concrete.
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From post: 132912, Topic: tid=8308, author=Maarschalk wrote:Much better, makes the cliff hanging a little easier!....;):P:cool:
Ah! That is bad... must keep cliffhangers hard so you get more exercise! :cool:;):P:P:P

From post: 132963, Topic: tid=8308, author=Marvin wrote:
From post: 132752, Topic: tid=8308, author=Cindy wrote:Try working outside trying to shovel off a concrete area that is 24 feet by 48 feet for 3 hours with the wind blowing and it raining...Add snow to that sometimes and... .;)
:o Well, I just re-read your reply, Cindy, and can't figure what else, besides snow, you'd need to shovel off the concrete.
lol A mysterious secret that only I know... ;):P hehe I have another secret that I'm about ready to burst with, but I mustn't tell! :o lol Yes, I'm full of energy right now... too full of energy and secrets are so hard to keep when I'm like this... ;):P:P:P:P
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:o You need to stay away from that 5-Hour Energy junk.
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From post: 133006, Topic: tid=8308, author=Marvin wrote::o You need to stay away from that 5-Hour Energy junk.
I don't drink anything that is energizing. I just got some really exciting news about my book tis all... ;) I'm back to being serious... getting online in the middle of another clan's business helped snap me out of it and into my other all too common mood. :cool:
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From post: 132967, Topic: tid=8308, author=Cindy wrote:
From post: 132912, Topic: tid=8308, author=Maarschalk wrote:Much better, makes the cliff hanging a little easier!....;):P:cool:
Ah! That is bad... must keep cliffhangers hard so you get more exercise! :cool:;):P:P:P

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From post: 132752, Topic: tid=8308, author=Cindy wrote:Try working outside trying to shovel off a concrete area that is 24 feet by 48 feet for 3 hours with the wind blowing and it raining...Add snow to that sometimes and... .;)
:o Well, I just re-read your reply, Cindy, and can't figure what else, besides snow, you'd need to shovel off the concrete.
lol A mysterious secret that only I know... ;):P hehe I have another secret that I'm about ready to burst with, but I mustn't tell! :o lol Yes, I'm full of energy right now... too full of energy and secrets are so hard to keep when I'm like this... ;):P:P:P:P
I can think about a lot of things that can relatively be shoveled of a Drive way or Concrete pad for hours relatively depending on how many animals and what kind, the size of the drive way/pad, weather, location, and season. For example if you live in the Desert try shoveling your driveway/pad of 3 feet of sand after a sand storm!.......;):P:cool:
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:cool: I knew somebody would eventually bring up that type of shoveling. And I'm not at all surprised it was Maars. ;)
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LOL Marv!, Am I beeing shoveled now?....;):P:P:P:P:P
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Ok, what were we talking about again? :o Too confusing for me right now...

I do have a treat for you guys though... you'll probably kill me for this, but... I couldn't resist! :P

Random part from my story...

The man woke up an hour later and went to check on his passenger. Cautiously opening the door, he looked in. Seeing her curled up in a ball brought a sad smile to his face. Memories of before the war came into his mind, but he quickly banished them. There was no point in ‘what ifs’ or ‘could’ve been’. What was done was done.

Walking up to her, he kneeled down beside her. Looking at her tear streaked face smote him. He had made her cry. “If there is a God out there and if you are listening to me please make this worth her pain for her sake.� He whispered as he wiped the dried tears off her cheeks.

He thought that he’d better leave before the girl woke up so that she wouldn’t start crying again, but he needed information before they reached their destination. Wiping all feelings from his face, he shook her awake.

Cindy woke up by someone shaking her. When she saw who it use she attacked him. He just grabbed her arm and twisted it behind her back – not hard enough to hurt, but hard enough that she stayed put. “What do you want?� She demanded through clenched teeth.

“I want to know what your name is Miss.� His voice was calm, but icy.

“I’m not going to ever tell you my name.� Cindy said still clenching her teeth. She wanted to hurt this guy so badly, but she couldn't.

“Miss, we can do this the easy way or the hard way. You won’t like the hard way, so I suggest that you’d better cooperate.� After a couple of minutes with no answer from the girl, he twisted her arm just a little bit more.

“Ouch!�

“What is your name?� When she still didn’t answer, he said, “Did you know that if twisted far enough a person’s arm can be broken? Do you want that to happen to you?�

“No.� Cindy said through clenched teeth. Her arm hurt. Her shoulder hurt. Her heart hurt. And there was nothing she could do about it.

“Okay then, tell me your name.� He was trying to not let any of his words show that he felt sorry about doing this, but he truly felt bad for it.

“My name is none of your business.� Cindy growled out her reply, but as soon as she did, her arm was twisted just a little bit farther. “Owww! It’s Cindy. Cindy, Cindy, Cindy, I’m telling you it’s Cindy!�

“That is much better Cindy.� The man released her arm and she ran to the other end of the room.

“You’re mean.� Cindy yelled at him while rubbing her hurt arm.



I know, I'm mean to you guys. I didn't even tell what Chapter that was from... ;):P:P:P Now maybe somebody will randomly attack me when I'm in-game instead of the other way around. :cool:

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:cool: I get the feeling that little snippet is from every chapter. ;)
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Much more interesting then the original part!.....;):cool:
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Just felt like rewriting a couple parts in my book in between researching domestic animals in Turkey for school and sleeping... so I thought I'd share part of it with ya'll. :)



Cindy’s eyes fluttered open for an instant before she jumped out of bed. She stared around the room for a few minutes before she remembered what had happened. She was back at home at last.

Cindy didn’t remember much about the accident, but everybody told her that she had stumbled upon a secret military project at the exact moment that the project had made an explosion. She just remembered falling and then slipping into unconsciousness. The army personnel had finally left her alone after asking her what she remembered several times.

Cindy lay back down – she was still tired even though for the last several months she had been at the hospital. She sighed. It felt good to be home again, but she didn’t like not being able to remember what had happened at the accident.

Cindy heard a knock on her bedroom door. She immediately pretended to be asleep. She wasn’t sure why – something just didn’t feel right. She heard the door slowly open and heard someone walking across the room. When the person was almost to her bed she jumped up ready to defend herself against any unknown danger.

One look at her Mom’s face and Cindy knew that she was going to head back to the hospital. The automatic response of defense wasn’t supposed to be part of any child’s life – especially in their own home and just out of the hospital.

“Are you okay?� Cindy’s Mom asked soothingly.

“Yeah, I’m fine. You just scared me.� Cindy said relaxing and sitting down on the edge of her bed.

“I know, but you heard the Doctor. If you get scared and react like that you have to go back to the hospital. That explosion must have shattered your nerves completely. Where did you learn how to just jump up and be ready to fight like that though?�

“I don’t remember.� Cindy said honestly. “Please don’t make me go back there though. I don’t like it there and I can’t even think there.�

“I know sweetie, but Doctor’s orders must be followed.� Cindy’s Mom smiled reassuringly at her. “Come on, let’s get ready to go. The sooner we get there, the sooner we can be back home, right?�

“I suppose.� Cindy mumbled and watched her Mom walk back out her door. She hated the thought of going back to the hospital.

Cindy grabbed her bag – it was still packed from getting home just last night. Sighing she thought, ‘What a long stay at home.’ She quickly walked through the quiet house and got into the car.

As Cindy got into the vehicle, she kept thinking, ‘Maybe, just maybe, the Doctor will just let me come back home.’ In her heart she knew that that was just wishful thinking on her part.
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Thanks for sharing Cindy. Made for a interesting after work read :)
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After a while of just sitting on the bed, laying down on it, getting back up, and being completely bored, a woman came in. As she came in, all of the girls stood at attention like Cindy had seen in movies back home on Earth for military schools.

Cindy’s brain began to piece together what was happening to her. ‘The Nythians are training me to be a soldier. Why else would they keep me alive?’ The thought scared her a bit – she wasn’t a soldier. She didn’t like the thought of hurting anyone!

As Cindy’s mind was trying to formulate a plan to get out of this very unpleasant situation, the woman was coming toward her. The woman's voice snapped Cindy's attention back from her planning as she said, "Cindy attention!"

Cindy jumped since she hadn't realized that the woman had come up right next to her. After getting over her first scare though, she scowled at the woman, crossed her arms, and proceeded to glare at her while slouching just a little bit. It was her favorite posture for use on her teachers back home on Earth. Wait. She wasn't supposed to think about home. It made her somewhat sad, but not for long.

The woman's expression of disbelief, anger, and astonishment made Cindy double over laughing. Even some of the other kids giggled at the look on their commander's face. With her face bright red from laughing so hard, Cindy stood awaiting her punishment. She knew that to keep order the woman would have to do something, but it was well worth any punishment in her opinion to have seen the look on the commander's face.

“You, miss Cindy,� the commander finally growled, “are going to help out in the scrap yard. What you did was most unwise.�

“Yes ma’am.� Cindy saluted mockingly with a twinkle in her eye. ‘What kind of cool things will I learn in the scrap yard?’ She let her mind wander over the possibilities of what she could learn. ‘The more I learn, the sooner I’ll be on my way back home. Now that was a good thought! I must hold onto it.’

“Hmm… maybe being part of the scrap yard is too good for you.� The commander glared at Cindy’s mischievous smile and looked quite annoyed when she saw the twinkle in her newest recruit’s eyes.

The other girls, however, found it quite entertaining to watch Cindy challenge the commander’s authority. As long as it didn’t land them in trouble of course! Trouble for them would never do, but it was always fun to watch the new girl or, even better, girls learn not to mess with the commander the hard way.

They were surprised when Cindy replied to the commander, “Oh no, I don’t think being part of the scrap yard is too good for me, but don’t you think I might get into a little bit of trouble?� The mischievous smile grew larger.

“Just get your work done on time.� The commander growled and then stalked away. The other girls giggled at Cindy’s mock salute behind their commander’s back.


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Keep it coming...very cool!.....;):P:cool::cool::cool::cool::cool:
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:cool: Wait 'till she starts loading that scrap into a ship's cargo bay ... and discovers who is piloting the ship.
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Lol, way to sass the commander Cindy! She just better hope you don't find a crowbar at the scrapyard :P Good job! :)
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I haven't been writing since I went to boarding school, but now that I'm back home this story will get finished. :) Random part of the book... ;)

The next couple of weeks went the almost the same way for Cindy. She kept getting better at her work by figuring what different parts did what easier and sorting them more efficiently. She also didn't get hurt as much during the fights, especially with Annalise by her side, and was impressing her teachers with her “natural fighting skill� as they called it. To reward her, the leaders of the operation were letting her take a class on how to build her own ship and take proper care of it.

Cindy was told that her training was pretty much done, but that she would be able to continue being a trainee until her ship design, building, and care class was completed. She was very happy about this aspect as she was creating her own spacecraft with components that no one else wanted because they were only an experimental prototype version of the tested components. The only difference was that if the components worked, they’d be twice as powerful, but no one else wanted to take the chance of them not working.

The other students who were in Cindy’s class said that she was crazy for willing accepting the experimental prototype components that no one else wanted. They all informed her that her ship would never fly. It would never be worth the space it took up according to them.

Cindy’s teacher told her that it might work. There was a slight chance that her design would work, and that if it did, there wouldn't be another ship in the entire universe that could beat hers technologically wise.

Cindy held onto that chance. That slim chance brought hope to her heart. She had designed this ship based on everything the base had provided her to read on different ship models, how they were built, and how well they ran. Her teacher had promised that as long as the components worked properly, the ship would fly. Cindy was sure that they would work, that her ship could fly, and that she would be going home as soon as she could.

The day finally came that everyone in the class had been anxiously looking forward to. It was launch day. All of the students had completed their own ship and each ship was different based on the preferences of the student who had designed it. Everyone was hopeful that their ship would fly, but Cindy’s hopes had more to do with a way to get home than anything else.

She knew that she could now take on grown men in fights, and win against them very easily, with or without anyone else’s help. She had grown stronger and wiser in the 3 months she had been with the Nythians. She still didn't like the idea of becoming a soldier, but she didn't plan on staying around long enough to officially become a soldier.

It was finally Cindy’s turn to test fly her ship. Since it had all of the experimental components, she had been last in line to launch. Her ship was towed out to the runway and she was told to get in it. She clambered into the pilot’s seat and put the helmet with radio on her head.

The first test was to check to make sure that the radio in her helmet was working correctly. “This is Cindy in the ship Canary Dido asking for conformation of radio connection. Over.� She said fully expecting for it to work just fine.
“This is headquarters, your radio connection checks out perfectly fine. You are free to launch the Canary Dido. Over.�

Cindy smiled. Her ship would work, she was sure of it. She turned on the power and waited for the ship’s artificial intelligence to boot up. Like all of her components, it was an experimental prototype that was supposed to learn as it got older. The ship’s computer system blinked on for about five seconds, but then shut off again. Leaving a memory dump message on the screen in front of her.

Cindy sighed. She never should have believed that it would work. She wanted to burn the entire space craft. As she started to take the helmet off, the lights turned back on and the system booted up.

Cindy’s jaw dropped open as she heard the artificial intelligence speak. “Hello commander Cindy. It’s been a long time my friend.�
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:cool: Please make it a slow and easy takeoff. Too many Gs and Cindy will pass out. Like in a George Pal movie.
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you'll only pass out with downward G's (relative to your body) not frontal G's.
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:cool: There are positive Gs and negative Gs. To which are you referring?
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I think he's talking about the kind that 'push' you back into your seat when accelerating. Which ever kind that is. :)

LOL Frontal G's - the newest most dangerous American street gang! :P:P

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Been away for a few days. But noticed this story upon my return, really fun to read. I have to make time to read the whole thread as I haven't read the whole story to this point. What I have read has been awesome though, can't wait for more. Out of curiosity was there an "Ender's Game" influence at all?
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It sounds as if I'll have to read up on G's ... lol You guys make sure I do my homework before writing, don't ya? :P Thanks for the tip though! :)

From post: 151538, Topic: tid=8308, author=oni14128 wrote:Been away for a few days. But noticed this story upon my return, really fun to read. I have to make time to read the whole thread as I haven't read the whole story to this point. What I have read has been awesome though, can't wait for more. Out of curiosity was there an "Ender's Game" influence at all?
I only have bits and pieces of my story up here... I'm working on turning the little bits and pieces that I have written into a book and this is just where I type things out to see how people like them. Since I have no idea what "Ender's Game" is, I guess there was no influence from it. ;) Glad that you like what you have read. :)
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