Rise and Fall

MasterMindLess · Post by **MasterMindLess** » Sat Dec 09, 2006 4:32 pm

Wow... Looks great, Rami! Looking forward to reading it in full.

Could you e-mail me a copy? (I, too, prefer to read on paper)

Thanks,

MasterMindLess

tha_rami · Post by **tha_rami** » Sat Sep 27, 2008 12:15 am

In the category necrobump, I've just completed reading through this and will be continuing this story shortly.

For those that are not aware, this story takes place in the gap in the official lore between the Starwraith/Evochron Alliance games and Arvoch Conflict/Evochron Renegades. This means there's still an Alliance and a Federation (sniff, they appear to be gone). The Vonari are not involved as explained in Arvoch Conflict.

[Edited on 27-9-2008 by tha_rami]

warsign · Post by **warsign** » Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:29 am

Woow.
This must be a novel that's for sure.
Really good friend.

tha_rami · Post by **tha_rami** » Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:49 pm

Thank you. I'm currently graphing out the story as to see how I can most easily bring the different storylines back together. The point is I didn't really know how to end it until now, except for a few... crucial conclusions. Let me repeat earlier poll:

I need some feedback! How to take the story from here:

Option A: War actually starts and many die, but war stops later.
Option B: It comes to a frontline-to-frontline situation, but not to mayor conflict.
Option C: No frontline-to-frontline, no War. Just a race against the clock while the fleets approach eachother.
Option D: It comes to a mayor conflict, but the casualties are still low at the end.
Option E: It comes to a frontline-2-frontline conflict, but the mayor part of the fleet do not join the battle.